Original Poem Composition (Traditional Haiku)

Haiku

Traditional Haikus:
     Love Nature
Silence around us,
Feel the Calmness of the World.
Hearts do the Action.
                          
Draft:
     (Love) Nature
Silence around us,
Feel the Calmness of the Sea (World).
Hands (Hearts) search (do) for (the) a way (Action).

Traditional Haiku:                                                                                                      

             Hope

 To gaze at the moon,

 Gives new hope for the next day.

  A glimpse of a smile.

Draft:

         Guiding Light

To stare (gaze) at the moon,

Gives new beginning (hope) for tomorrow (the next day).

A glimpse of a smile.