Original Poem Composition (Free Form Tanka)

Free Form Tanka:

            Good Times
Happiness surrounds me,
And feel like there's no tomorrow.
Every second I am with you,
Yesterday is worth remembering.
Today is worth treasuring.

Draft;
Happiness surrounds me,
And feel like there's no tomorrow,
When (Every second) I am with you,
Yesterday is a history (worth remembering),
Today is a vision (worth treasuring).

Free Form Tanka:

    Friend of Mine

Alone in the shore,

Wondering in silence,

Then I heard footprints,

Footprints of my friend.

Who are there and stayed with me.

Draft:

   A good Friend (of Mine)

Alone in the beach (shore),

Wondering in silence,

Then I saw (heard) footprints,

Footprints of my friend.

Who are here and smiled (stayed) with me.