Original Poem Composition (Free form Haiku)

Haiku is all about nature.

Free Form Haiku:

Flowers,
Gives fragrance and beauty.
Scent of Success.

Draft:
Flowers,
Gives color (fragrance) and life (beauty).
Scent of Victory (Success).

Free Form Haiku:

Like Music,

Everything flows,

Just as Life has rhythm and harmony 

Draft:

Like Music,

Everything pass by(flows),

(Just as) Life has rhythm and harmony.